A Silly Little Poem...
wake in the morning
can't forget to brush
thought it was toothpaste
but grabbed the wrong mush
brushin' with foot cream
time for a mouth flush
shredded love head is
givin' you a head rush
I said How ya doin'?
you said The one on the right.
my mistake for talkin' to ya
while your brain's mid-flight
Is there anybody in there?
awareness bright as night
probably shredded love head
deer in the headlights
gettin' your swerve on
you try driving straight
its never gonna happen
because of this ADD trait
eyes spy something shiny
no wonder you're always late
must be shredded love head
you really took the bait
spent the night alone
wishin' to be fed
by a hot sweet body
wet spots on the bed
dreamin' of the friction
cold showers instead
yet another symptom of
the shredded love head
-ME
THC ridden lung butter coughed upon your eyes by Hubris @ 10:01 AM
12 Souls whispering "wake up" into my ear
12 Comments:
I am soooo loving this. It could even be a really good song...a little unplugged guitar. I can be a groupie :)
-N
That's the plan eventually. Congratulations! Your Groupie status has been approved.
This poem was dedicated to someone.
well since this is obviously a groupie casting call...i'm in too!
cute poem...i identify fully with parts of it.
Hey thanks! Crushes will do this sort of thing to otherwise "sound minded" folks. It makes us crazy. This was partially written with my own experience inserted as well. I'm just craaazy about my girlfriend. She makes my tummy feel funny. :)
Shredded love head...that's fantastic!
Well, if it becomes a song and needs recording, you're welcome to come down to Southern CA to record it. I'd be happy to help.
Cute poem. I do miss the shredded love head sensation... It makes for good poetry.
But then again, so does loneliness and torment. Hmm, maybe I should write something...
Sonus-
I do really have my best writing moments after having my heart broken. And I will sacrifice for the art...hehehe oh well :)
-N
Thank you Jmai!
Sonus & Nat
Art through pain & suffering is very easy to tap. If you want an awesome book on that subject, I highly recommend "Diary" by Chuck Paliniuk
also, that which I have written as a result of pain & suffering is far better in my opinion.
Hmm...
Maybe that's why I haven't done anything creative or interesting lately: I haven't had any significant personal pain or heartbreak in the last couple years. Maybe I need to get dumped or rejected?
:: runs off in search of someone who'll break his heart ::
it has a beetles vibe..you know.."day in the life" style.
ole! me likey!
Thank you, Buttah. I'm really surprised by the positive responses I get from my writing. I have another one that will be released by the end of the week. It makes my day that you enjoy my silly thoughts. :)
Heya Hedonist! Speaking of potential song lyrics, I'm gonna steal this and set it to music. It's too good to abandon to the blogosphere.
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