Waking From A Coma
On the frozen ground he lay face up. His friends held smelling salts to his nose. Coughing & shaking, he began to speak about his new & old consciousness...
On the frozen ground he lay face up. His friends held smelling salts to his nose. Coughing & shaking, he began to speak about his new & old consciousness...
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Excellent! If you want some pointers I'll give em, but otherwise just continue drawing. You have a talent for it.
Thank you very much! And pointer away, its not like I couldn't use the input of a more experienced hand.
OK then,
Pay more attention to your line weight. Specifically look for areas of overlap that can be emphasised. For instance, where the infants ear touches its mothers shoulder, go ahead and bump that line on the ear up just a little bit on the outside of the ear. Not much, just at that point of contact and faded out gently from there. This will bring the little one out in front of her mother. This works in other points of intersection as well but I will let you find them. Right now the pillow is the focal point of the drawing and I think that you would rather the faces of the mother and child be the most emphasised areas
Also reexamine the mothers left arm. It looks a little stylized to me. Other than that, its a very fine drawing. Some really beautiful passages thoughout. I am especially impressed with the infant's stomach area and the mothers mouth. You were obviously really looking for and finding the subtle variations in tonal shifts. Keep drawing! You are very talented.
Wow.. I am so very impressed. I cannot draw for my life and I am in awe of people that can. It almost looks like a pic that was put through photoshop to make it look like a drawing.
I love it :)
-N
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I'm with Natalia. I can't draw worth a damn, but this one is really good. I've enjoyed watching it progress. Keep it up dude.
yeah i've also enjoyed the progress on this one. and i'm with natalia on the coolness of the photoshoppy drawing effect... :)
Thank you all very very much. I'm more confident in my skills or attaining skills for drawing. It's my discipline that I particularly wish to improve upon. More drawing = More drawingS yes?
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