Wednesday, February 01, 2006

Waking From a Coma

On the frozen ground he lay face up
shaking aching and coughing up

ammonia spirits piercing his nose
deliver sharp blows to come to know

and oh how they burn like January air
from truth to dare its never fair

grass brittle razors frosted light blue
very different hue but so are you

under the dead skin starting to feel
its burning parting yearning to peel

red all around and laughing like mad
staring at sutures more than he had

awake to this life one you don't know
converging two plains emerge from below

it is never its now its always been
savagery beauty commingling again


-me

9 Comments:

At 2/01/2006 11:09:00 AM, Blogger da buttah said...

*snaps*

love it :)

 
At 2/01/2006 10:41:00 PM, Blogger The Mighty Doll said...

*smile*

I like it even more in a written form I can read, re-read and peruse.

It's, I think, the best I've read of your work yet.

 
At 2/02/2006 01:01:00 PM, Blogger Hubris said...

Thank you, MD. I don't really know where these come from or why I need to write them but there you go.

 
At 2/05/2006 07:32:00 PM, Blogger Natalia said...

wowza :) Me likey very very very much.

And I like that you share it with us even more.

-N

 
At 2/06/2006 10:28:00 AM, Blogger Hubris said...

Sharing is something I can't help doing. I am thankful that you wisdh to listen... I really wish these would come to me more often. But twith each one, I'm finding I must wait until waiting has been filled.

Thank you Nat

 
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